Jogo perfeito, mas deveria ter alguma forma de salvar seu progresso, qmo tanto esse jogo, mas toda vez q eu entro tenho q jogar tudo denovo. Pois toda vez q saio do jogo meu processo é perdido
Hello! Ok so if Google translate worked, you didn’t know how to save? Click on the arrow in the middle there and you can save. I’d recommend exporting your saves, too. 😁
Actually it’s 3 chapters, no prologue, and a very rough estimate would be 14-15 chapters. I’m not sure where you got your info but it’s incorrect. This story is still very early stages. 🙂
Hello! If you look at the link “more information” you can see this IF is listed as in development. You can also see the published date, which was January of this year. It’s still very new but I’ve got big things planned. Thank you for giving it a try!
Tbh Calliope is such a goofball 😂❤️ I wonder what exactly she thought when she saw the weapon 🤔, she probably thought of her dad who honestly (at least to me from the encounter in chapter 2) seemed like a nice man who loves his daughter [okay i should stop talking before i start rambling and this comment gets too long]
OHHH MY GOOOOD !!!! chapter 3 was a banger... so many people to romance... oh my !! and that ENDING!!! how could you leave us on such a cliffhanger </3 i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
TELLUS MY BOY AAAAA A *writhing on the floor and foaming at the mouth* like i adore this if so much and when we discovered tellus had died i was so distraught, so this reveal had me screaming fr! i am so excited for future updates and getting to reunite with him aaa thank you sm for sharing your beautiful writing with us, it bring me such joy
Here I am, innocently reading the newest chapter. Flirting here and there, wondering who I might see a future with when BAM! That ending hit and left my jaw on the floor and my heart racing. Welp, looks like my 1st romance has been decided. A+ chapter! Can't wait for the next one after all this.
I just read all 3 chapters during these last few hours and I love it so much ! Can't wait to see more of Vicente ! I'm really excited to see what happens next
Apologies if this is a bad place to ask, but when I play in the browser on PC, the music doesn't play. On mobile (where I started the game), it plays fine. I was wondering if there's a way to fix it in my browser on PC?
Btw, already loving it and I *just* started playing. :)
Hello! When you play from a save, (which I'm assuming you're doing since you switched devices) the music doesn't automatically start. As far as I can tell this is a Sugarcube thing and no real way to fix it. The music will kick in when you hit a scene or passage where the music changes, for example between chapters 1 and 2. If you start a new game on the browser, you'd hear the music fine from the beginning.
Having used JavaScript wayyyy too much already, I can confirm that this is a browser issue - for security reasons, chrome prevents audio from playing without some sort of interaction from the user to directly start it. Another possibility (more likely) is that the audio isn't re-initiated every page, and so when you load a save after a page that initiates audio then the audio will not continue to play.
That's incredible! I was transported into your world and now I am struggling to come down reality. Incredible characters and beautiful story surrounding the Iredicci. Can't wait for more!
Hello! I'm currently working on my own interactive fiction, and I just wanted to say how much I love yours! Both Cantata and Viatica are and still will be huge inspiration for my work. Thank you so much! Keep doing what you're doing 😉
P.S. At risk of sounding self-absorbed, if you could give any feedback on my story so far that would be super helpful! 😁 I'm trying to gather people's thoughts on my work since it's my first interactive novel so far. Either way, thank you so much!
Thank you so much! To hear that I've inspired another is the best compliment, truly.
I'd be happy to take a look at your work and tell you what I think. But I have to warn you... I've done a lot of copyediting and proofreading in my career and tend to be hyper critical (of my own work included). Are you looking for a full on red pen, grammatical deep dive or just broad thoughts and light suggestions?
Either way, congratulations on your first IF and good luck with the project!
Thank you! I'm looking for both story-related and grammatical/structural edits, but you can be as critical as you need haha (I'm well aware of how "slash-and-burn" the publishing industry can be, though I've never gone through that exact process myself) As a side note, though, I've already found some errors and edits in the story so far - so there may be some things you point out that have already been fixed, just not released yet. Thank you for your help, though! It's definitely always super helpful for me to get feedback on my work!
Your writing is so beautiful. The world of this story is also very unique. My favourite part of your stories are the characters. I love them all, even in the early stages. It's clear to see that you are passionate about what you do, and I hope you continue to create these amazing stories. You've certainly inspired me to pick up writing again, even if it's just for me. Thank you!
Thank you! To hear that I've inspired others is truly the best praise I could ever receive. And I 100% encourage writing for yourself. It took me decades to return to writing outside of a professional capacity, but I am so glad I did!
I'm sorry, but no, not at this time. May I ask what browser you're using? I had one reader mention they had some trouble with Microsoft Edge. I use Google Chrome and it works fine so maybe try that?
😞 ok...i understand...should i be bracing myself for no support/love in the near future?😟 juuuust gotta prepare. I'm a hyper empath 😅 I have faith in u to make the story amazing tho, pls dont take this as like criticism😍
THE WAY I AUDIBLY GASPED....author pls...is he taken....what do u mean there are only 4 ro's im crying 😭😭 im joking but wow what a way to end the chapter!!! im so excited for the next one!! ahhh!!!
!!!!!!!!!! HE'S GORGEOUSSS 😭 i can feel the pain coming soon w his story and im so here for it we can help each other heal 🥲 but wow i'm literally in love with all 5 of them you're incredible! i'm about to make different mcs for all of them bc i cant choose lol
That's wonderful, I'm glad you appreciate that option! A commenter here on my itch page mentioned it and it was a great suggestion. I'm glad you can relate to your MC better now. :)
AHHH I LOVE THIS!!! Everything about this is so enrapturing! The writing is amazing, the characters all feel so rich, and the music! I can't wait for the coming chapters!!!
Omg I just finished chapter 3 and that ending!!! How cruel of you to leave us hanging with THAT 😭
That being said, I can't wait to read more of this story! I already knew it was gonna be amazing ever since you announced it (after all I LOVED Viatica so it was a given) and I like how the story is going along 🥰 I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter! Thank you for your work as always ❤️
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Jogo perfeito, mas deveria ter alguma forma de salvar seu progresso, qmo tanto esse jogo, mas toda vez q eu entro tenho q jogar tudo denovo. Pois toda vez q saio do jogo meu processo é perdido
Hello! Ok so if Google translate worked, you didn’t know how to save? Click on the arrow in the middle there and you can save. I’d recommend exporting your saves, too. 😁
Corinne, my beloved… I will protect you.
Yay, Corinne romancer! 🙌🏻
I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS A DEMO </3
it's a demo? like is it short or long enough?
it’s prologue + three chapters, estimated to be ten chapters when finished iirc (so it’s nearly a third)
Actually it’s 3 chapters, no prologue, and a very rough estimate would be 14-15 chapters. I’m not sure where you got your info but it’s incorrect. This story is still very early stages. 🙂
Hello! If you look at the link “more information” you can see this IF is listed as in development. You can also see the published date, which was January of this year. It’s still very new but I’ve got big things planned. Thank you for giving it a try!
THE ARTTTTT>>>>
My artist Isabela is amazing! ❤️
Tbh Calliope is such a goofball 😂❤️ I wonder what exactly she thought when she saw the weapon 🤔, she probably thought of her dad who honestly (at least to me from the encounter in chapter 2) seemed like a nice man who loves his daughter [okay i should stop talking before i start rambling and this comment gets too long]
I’m glad you like Calliope! Thank you for reading!
I yearn for Tellus like a man yearning for water in a desert...
🤭
WHY do i always miss the updates when they happen 😭
Nooooo, it can't end there!? 😭 How am I gonna choose between Vicente and Tellus?
At least let me hug Tellus the human in next chapter. Also, I loved getting the chance to sing a dirge for our family and ppl.
Lol, sorry for making your choice harder. 😅 And I’m so glad you liked that scene, that was probably my favorite!
OMGGGGGGGGGGG IM FANGIRLLING OVER EVERYONEEE
YIPPEEEEEE
😆🥳
OMGGGGGG PLSS WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE OMG TELLUS OMGOMGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!
Glad you’re excited but next chapter won’t be for a while; I’m estimating September/October timeframe. 🙂
RAHHHHH VINCENTE!!!!! i'm at school and have set his art as my wallpaper. I am a forever procrastinator for you, Fir. :3333
Yasss! I love that!
finally someone loves me procrastinating lmao <3 :3
That cliffhanger was absolutely diabolical.
Brilliantly done.
Thank you! 😈
OHHH MY GOOOOD !!!! chapter 3 was a banger... so many people to romance... oh my !! and that ENDING!!! how could you leave us on such a cliffhanger </3
i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
Lol, the next chapter will be worth it, I promise! 🫶🏻
ohh i have no doubt haha !! can't wait<3
TELLUS MY BOY AAAAA A *writhing on the floor and foaming at the mouth* like i adore this if so much and when we discovered tellus had died i was so distraught, so this reveal had me screaming fr! i am so excited for future updates and getting to reunite with him aaa thank you sm for sharing your beautiful writing with us, it bring me such joy
Thank you for your kind words! I’m excited that you’re excited 😆
AHHHHH OMG U CANNOT LET ME LIVE WITH THIS CLIFFHANGER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEE
tellus yesssss his image is just woooow and i love vicnete grllllll we need an update
I just updated 5 days ago. 😅
sorry i didnt see the date of updating i was playing offline . i meant that im so excited for the next update
thank u for all your eforts🌷💗💗💛
🫶🏻
Here I am, innocently reading the newest chapter. Flirting here and there, wondering who I might see a future with when BAM! That ending hit and left my jaw on the floor and my heart racing. Welp, looks like my 1st romance has been decided. A+ chapter! Can't wait for the next one after all this.
Lol, thank you! I’m glad my story made such an impact. 😆
I just read all 3 chapters during these last few hours and I love it so much ! Can't wait to see more of Vicente ! I'm really excited to see what happens next
Vicente and I thank you! 😁
Apologies if this is a bad place to ask, but when I play in the browser on PC, the music doesn't play. On mobile (where I started the game), it plays fine. I was wondering if there's a way to fix it in my browser on PC?
Btw, already loving it and I *just* started playing. :)
Hello! When you play from a save, (which I'm assuming you're doing since you switched devices) the music doesn't automatically start. As far as I can tell this is a Sugarcube thing and no real way to fix it. The music will kick in when you hit a scene or passage where the music changes, for example between chapters 1 and 2. If you start a new game on the browser, you'd hear the music fine from the beginning.
I hope that made sense!
Having used JavaScript wayyyy too much already, I can confirm that this is a browser issue - for security reasons, chrome prevents audio from playing without some sort of interaction from the user to directly start it. Another possibility (more likely) is that the audio isn't re-initiated every page, and so when you load a save after a page that initiates audio then the audio will not continue to play.
Ah, I understand. Thanks to you both! :)
I am so excited to get more of this game. I absolutely NEED more of Vicente
Thank you! I'm glad Vicente still has his fans. There was a mass exodus to Tellus, lol.
Giving my mans a Puss in Boots personality with a yearning for vengeance. This'll be fun.
Niiiiiiiice!
That's incredible! I was transported into your world and now I am struggling to come down reality. Incredible characters and beautiful story surrounding the Iredicci. Can't wait for more!
Thank you so much!
Hello! I'm currently working on my own interactive fiction, and I just wanted to say how much I love yours! Both Cantata and Viatica are and still will be huge inspiration for my work. Thank you so much! Keep doing what you're doing 😉
P.S. At risk of sounding self-absorbed, if you could give any feedback on my story so far that would be super helpful! 😁 I'm trying to gather people's thoughts on my work since it's my first interactive novel so far. Either way, thank you so much!
Thank you so much! To hear that I've inspired another is the best compliment, truly.
I'd be happy to take a look at your work and tell you what I think. But I have to warn you... I've done a lot of copyediting and proofreading in my career and tend to be hyper critical (of my own work included). Are you looking for a full on red pen, grammatical deep dive or just broad thoughts and light suggestions?
Either way, congratulations on your first IF and good luck with the project!
Thank you! I'm looking for both story-related and grammatical/structural edits, but you can be as critical as you need haha (I'm well aware of how "slash-and-burn" the publishing industry can be, though I've never gone through that exact process myself) As a side note, though, I've already found some errors and edits in the story so far - so there may be some things you point out that have already been fixed, just not released yet. Thank you for your help, though! It's definitely always super helpful for me to get feedback on my work!
THE CLIFFHANGER OMG
This is so good you're amazing as always !
Thank you!
Your writing is so beautiful. The world of this story is also very unique. My favourite part of your stories are the characters. I love them all, even in the early stages. It's clear to see that you are passionate about what you do, and I hope you continue to create these amazing stories. You've certainly inspired me to pick up writing again, even if it's just for me. Thank you!
Thank you! To hear that I've inspired others is truly the best praise I could ever receive. And I 100% encourage writing for yourself. It took me decades to return to writing outside of a professional capacity, but I am so glad I did!
TELLUS!!! im so excited for the next chap <3 i love your writing: thank you for making this!!
You are most welcome!
is it possible to make a downloadable version? it doesnt run on my browser for some reason
I'm sorry, but no, not at this time. May I ask what browser you're using? I had one reader mention they had some trouble with Microsoft Edge. I use Google Chrome and it works fine so maybe try that?
im using opera since it runs smoother on my computer maybe thats why..ty for the response though! ill just try on my other device when i can.
i love this story so far and i love every single character!!! and that surprise reveal at the end of this chapter... my heartttt 😭💕
Thank you!
my relief at not being the only one who formed an attachment to tellus within the 5 or so sentences he was mentioned in is insane.
and now you've BLESSED US LIKE THIS??? you're too good to us
I’m so glad you all did form an attachment because you manifested this! ❤️
Tellus my love! Be sweet to me again! 😩If I don't get a bear hug I will straight up cry
Erm… well… you’ll get a hug eventually? It might take some doing. 😅
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😞 ok...i understand...should i be bracing myself for no support/love in the near future?😟 juuuust gotta prepare. I'm a hyper empath 😅 I have faith in u to make the story amazing tho, pls dont take this as like criticism😍
No worries, I didn’t take it as such! And I appreciate your faith in me. 😁
Tellus is going to be a prickly porcupine for a while. It’ll take some work to get past those defenses, but once you do, it’ll be worth it!
I love this game so much! End of demo give me a new hope.. I hope Tellus can be a RO in the future. I'm weak to childhood friend to lovers trope 🥺
So am I! And you are in luck, because he is. 😉
THAT'S A GREAT NEWS!!! THANK YOUU SM, I'M SO HAPPY!!! 😭😭😭
RAAHHHHHHHHHH YAYUAYAUAUYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYYAAYAYAYAYAYAYYAAYYAAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
THE WAY I AUDIBLY GASPED....author pls...is he taken....what do u mean there are only 4 ro's im crying 😭😭 im joking but wow what a way to end the chapter!!! im so excited for the next one!! ahhh!!!
There are now 5 ROs. ;)
!!!!!!!!!! HE'S GORGEOUSSS 😭 i can feel the pain coming soon w his story and im so here for it we can help each other heal 🥲 but wow i'm literally in love with all 5 of them you're incredible! i'm about to make different mcs for all of them bc i cant choose lol
CRIMINAL CLIFFHANGER!!! Keep up the good work !! :D
Lol, thank you!
OH MY GOD MY JAW DROPPED!!!!!!!!!!!!! (also im happy you can choose to wear a binder bcuz i relate to my MC more now :3)
That's wonderful, I'm glad you appreciate that option! A commenter here on my itch page mentioned it and it was a great suggestion. I'm glad you can relate to your MC better now. :)
:333
AHHH I LOVE THIS!!! Everything about this is so enrapturing! The writing is amazing, the characters all feel so rich, and the music! I can't wait for the coming chapters!!!
Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it and I can't wait to share more!
oh my gosh!! and here i was thinking i would never love something like i loved Viatica! i'm speechless, honestly
Aww, thank you!
I KNEW HE WAS ALIVE IM NOT CRAZY!!!!!
Lol, he actually wasn't. I never intended him to be a character, but he received so much love that I considered the possibility... and here we are!
Ok, this chapter was perfect, my reaction was the same as MC's at the end: speechless.
Thank you!
Omg I just finished chapter 3 and that ending!!! How cruel of you to leave us hanging with THAT 😭
That being said, I can't wait to read more of this story! I already knew it was gonna be amazing ever since you announced it (after all I LOVED Viatica so it was a given) and I like how the story is going along 🥰 I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter! Thank you for your work as always ❤️
Thank you for your kind words! I’m excited to share this story with you!